JonH2O's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chompy]

Wow.

Step responds:

Short and sweet! Thanks haha.

[Touch and Go]

That guitar is a synth or no? Really awesome midi work and play on the Attack Decay Sustain Release. I love the fades and the creep in of the slap bass.

Only parts of improvement I can see is sample melding and selection/production stuff to make the sounds your own and not so average. That gets better with time and honing your sound :) Looking forward to hearing more. Great work!!

Smitsy responds:

Thanks! The guitar is a synth, with the 'Hardcore' amp simulator on it from FL Studio. Cheers for the feedback, I must admit I am quite lazy when it comes to designing individual sounds!

[Hotline]

Great ideas in here. My only suggestions are from a production standpoint and you're just getting started. Excellent vibes and effects. Catchy melodies. I think what's missing is more midsection instruments that come in at around 3:00.

There's definitely room for more instruments to make this a fat track. Be sure to save this so when you super good years from now you can look back at the files and fatten and fill everything up. :D

Great job.

Lethal-Input responds:

Thanks! I will be sure to save this for the future :)

[Kinoh magiK - YODO]

Good stuff. It's funny because I always joke with people that I typically skip electronic songs at nearly always exactly 1:10 because that's when the intro is over and yours is no different haha.

However, it feels mixed very differently than other songs in the same genre. One thing I've read is to do comparative listening to songs that sound similar and mix to match. The vibe is there and I dig it a lot. I felt at 2:32 it was missing that KSHHHH bass that helps slow the track down.

It could also use more 16nd notes in the vocals to add less repetition.

kinohmagik responds:

Ha yeah its to make them Dj friendly :-)

Yeah I know what you mean, its the pat im least happy with on the track.

I know its not much but I have remixed phrase 1 and 3 after thr drop, also changed the drum template at 2.32, I think it fills in more of the space, but still not good enough yet tbh

Thanks

[Deep-C]

I enjoyed that. Thanks.

BenTibbetts responds:

You're welcome. :)

[~Boombox 2012~]

Your music is flow wub wub tastic.

keosni391 responds:

thanks man! ;D