JonH2O's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[:;Massisve:: (D&B) & keys]

Cool

Man, this is the coolest elavator music I've ever heard. Couldn't stop bobbing my head. I think the ending was a little rigid though. It began to fade (what seemed like) a little too soon, and then it went backto normal volume.....That was the only thing I didn't like about it.

Also, the way this track is set, it could go on for a really long span of time without getting old because it's really mellow. I mean, yeah the beat tembo is fast and such, but you get so accustomed to the catchy sounds that this is the kind of music you have playing in the background. That being said, that's why I said this was the coolest elavator music I've ever heard!

I would suggest making at least a couple more measures, and fixinf the way the song ends. if you changed the drums up a little bit it would be reeally cool, but don't foce it, you would have to do it right (I have no idea how that way is). It would jsut have to fit in with the feel of everything else.

I loved it. isn't it cool when your music gets used in a flash? haha.

-jon

[Anthem Of The Opera]

sweet

This totally reminded me of Super Mario RPG for the SNES..ahaha, do you know what I'm talking about?

Man, I've listened to about a dozen of your songs now. you have some talent man. ALl your stuff kicks ass. This song is no exception.

chead86 responds:

I think i know what ur talkin bout, just like the part where u go into Bowser's castle and Smithy is there? Maybe not, i haven't played that game in about 5 or 6 years, it was so cool tho man, prob one of my top 3 fav games of all time.

ANYways, thanks for the nice comments and takin the time to review my stuff btw, it's very helpful.

-Chead

[Red & Blue]

Crazy

Man, I really liked that guitar sounding sound, that was great. The beat flowed really great. The drums, strings, everything was awesome! You dropped the drums in really great places...I don't know what else to say!

It was awesome. Now all it needs is some bad ass lyrics.

chead86 responds:

Thnx for the review dude, ur stuff's cool as well. I wonder what kinda lyrics would go with this song tho?

-Chead

[Guitar Solo Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa]

Damn thats fast!

I really liked it. You have some talent. Although, it didn't seem to have any rhythm, it was jsut you playing fast regardless of the drums. No doubt you have awesome talent, but it was kind of hard to listen to because the drums didn't synch up with the solo.

You can pick lick crazy!! Awesome.

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Thanks for the compliments.I know it didn't go to well with the drums but I just couldn't think of anything to go with the drum track so I said screw it and just recorded a solo.Glad you like my guitar playing though.Thanks for the review man you've made my day.

[Random Things]

Cool

Really great strings in the beginning. I liked the high wood sounds too. The drums went well with everything going on. The bass was PERFECT. Man, I love random stuff like this; especially when it's not just noise. Really great work. made me want to square dance at some parts!

Awesome man.

-Jon

Lexx21 responds:

Thanx. I made this in a half hour so it was really random.

[Early work is done]

Amazing dude.

I just had to drop a line and say that this is really fucking cool. I loved every damn thing about it! Really great idea. HOLY SHIT!

crud responds:

if you listen carefully you can hear me bite into a juicy apple for a transition sound. heehee. i need to do more beatboxin', tiz fun. seeya man!

[Too Cold ( Crud's remix)]

Awesome.

Wow! I see you tried again! This is great man. I really liked the floating synths and that crunchy snare in the back. I agree, people should submit vocals as much as music, They would get used!!

Taking some time off? Havn't submitted anything in a month.

I like this track alot. You synched up the vocals pretty well. I think what could have made this a little cooler is when he says "and it SHOWS and it SHOWS and it SHOWS" you could have dropped in a few sounds when he says shows and dropped the beat a little bit. That would have been cool.

9's all around!

crud responds:

yeah man, finding time to create, work, submit and sleep (pfshhh, sleep.) can steal away the techno making fingers. The "shows" chorus was difficult to work with but the drop beat idea sounds badass. woulda, coulda shoulda.... thanks man!

[Those Soulful Chinese]

Perect.

perfect...All I can really say. Seriously.

LJCoffee responds:

:D ha ha... how much did you smoke before you listened to this?

Man... perfect is a pretty strong word! - Thanks a ton though - I'm really diggin' all of the encouragement that you've all given me.

Thanks again!
Talk to you later man!

[Sad Little Detune:WIP]

awesome!

I think you should keep wprking on it man. The sounds with delay feel to the whole track is really sweet! Man, I love that delay.

You ended it at a pretty good time. I think right where you left off you should add a low leveled, slowed down hihat that goes:

tsss CHS CHS CHS CHS CHS CHS
W H H H H H H
*next bar*
Tsss CHS CHS CHS CHS CHS
W. H H H H H

W. = 3 half notes
W = Whole note
H = Half Note
Tsss = Hihat open
CHS = Hihat closed

make sense? I donno, but that was going in my head and I think it would sound pretty cool like that.

This is really awesome man...Really fucking cool.
Let "us" know when you're don ith it. I'd love to hear it done.

I'm in the middle of a song right now too...I hear tons of stuff that could be better, which is why it's not done yet..Feel free to take a listen to what I got so far. =)

You get a 10 overall not as a whole song, but for what you have so far...DAMN IT'S COOL!!

-Jon

LJCoffee responds:

Thanks man.. I've already redone the drums a bit but I can still add those hats!! :)

I appreciate the review - Hopefully I won't dissappoint you too much with the final!

Talk to you later.

[gAb- quiet as a newfy]

cool

Creepy. Alien creepy.
I like it, lots of sounds.