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[NEW Tywo At Large Ep. #1]

cool

I sure do hope to see the 3 soon spoon doon hoon...too.

I think some of the humor was timing and it seemed to be off. It's hard to explain. I'd have to show you some examples with other cartoons on television and such. It's hard to explain.... it just seemed like there should have been slight pauses on certain parts of the audio for it to flow better. It didn't seem natural. I had the feeling like there was anxiety to get to the other scenes..it seemed like the movie was in a rush to end..

I liked the storyline, great ideas. TP bag to the face BEYOTCH!!

Pixmintro responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism, but you did hit the nail on the head. Once you're under extreme deadlines with lines that eh, lets face it, weren't recorded by the most professional people, you run into that problem. The next movie (Which truly seems it will be ready on Friday), I've worked a lot harder on character timing to aid in the flow of the jokes. It's just damn hard your first time around. :)

[Upstairs]

hmmm

Chuck-eh, you're seeing this film as the guy upstairs. This animation displayed the downfall of modern isolation. It showed the guy denying contact with a woman, in uncertainty shrugging his shoulders, to go and indulge in self-gratification through music.

I see this animation much more dark. The "transformation" you must be talking about is when the protagonist began listening to music and it colored the surroundings. But then, when the video zoomed out and displayed him in his room, it looked like a television for the stick figures. Making me feel like the Protagonists life is not derrived from the passion of music but how we isolate ourselves from the outside world to dissolve our minds into entertainment. While we sit here on our computers, we're not attending to our true god given desires of love, company, friendship, or anything else. As the outside world is throwing a party and conquering the world...you see.

Five-Iron responds:

I see!

Very dark indeed. I'd say that most people are used to seeing things in a box, or coming out of some strange device. I'd even agree with you about how our own isolation creates how we see things in our own world.

A very interesting comment that I will remember.

[VGDC comp. entry]

kick ass.

Woah, man....You used my song!! Awesome!
Really cool pre-loader and sound effects. The only thing that killed me was that roar from Yoshi...That nearly gave me a heart attack. That was loud as bejesus.

:)

Sticky responds:

thanks...i love that song by the way...

yeah i agree i probly should've lowered the volume on that roar but...meh...

[Rest in Peace]

Ahaha

Hey that was pretty funny. The first time I watched it I was distracted because I was hearing my song. I was cracking up when that dog got drowned. Great FBF animation. Short and sweet.
I'm glad you liked my song enough to use it. That's awesome!

-Jon

Astropuff responds:

I had to record the song on sound recorder cause the Audio Portal has been down for a long time.

Thx for the song ;)

[A Clockwork Peach]

hehe

augh...A Clockwork Orange...Such a great movie..This was a nice take on it. I would have enjoyed to see that funky blanket that was in the original film.. haha. It was like, a bunch of poofy triangles.
I liked the voices. Cudos to using the same music, it wouldn't have been the same without it.

Coffee-lock responds:

I did make an attempt at the blanket, but it was bloody hard. =(

[Not Fit to be S.W.A.T.]

blah

Don't mean to be rude, but there wasn't anything to really watch except moving text and a greatly drawn picture..It was just boring. It would be cool if you animated the whole scene out.

You should play what really happened, then havea voice over with what you would have done while it is playing out...That would be pretty funny.

HackingTime responds:

I'll see what I can doo...

[Ctrl + Z]

schweet

This was pretty damn funny. But I think it would be better if it were more HYPER..Does that make sense? You have the best fucking ideas man. I mean, a dude gets a comqrap computer and his mom gives him a freaking old ass yellow keyboard..ahaha. What really bugs me in your flash is the complete silence and then a split second of static before the talking starts. you should get a better microphone or recording software. Addthat and better sound effects and voice acting and stuff. It would be AWESOME!!

You have some really great ideas man, I've watched your other animation. It's good too. Just work a little on taht stuff . It would be cooler if it were faster, too.

Just a thouht :)

-jonh2o

Instinkt responds:

Thanks for the review. People are still watching this? I wonder how you even find it.

[Vg madness, metal gear]

Nice work

Although I did not like this flash, I do, however, respect the time you put into it. It just wasn't my deal. I watched a few of your older flash and you've gotten alot better at animation. I like the frame by frame movements you did every once in a while.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

okay, thanks

[Chubaka Confession I]

Sorry man, but I'm not diggin' it.

That was dumb. Is the whole thing like that? I couldn't stand reading those sappy subtitles. I couldn't care less.

Ogmz-Chubaka responds:

:D k