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Makeup your mind, don't let your mind make you up.
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\ A giant red naked demon dude with his penis stuck in a trunk...and me singing, "LIKE A DICK LIKE LIKE A DICK LIKE A DICK"......lol
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I LOVE YOUR SONG, can i have your autograph?
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Woah that was really fun. Reminds me of matrix defense on starcraft. Sweet!
I'd like to see a bigger screened version of this lol. I got a 24 inch widescreen and it'd be cool fi it were way bigger.
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Thanks, but I havn't seen matrix defense, but anyway, thanks for your comment.
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I sure do hope to see the 3 soon spoon doon hoon...too.
I think some of the humor was timing and it seemed to be off. It's hard to explain. I'd have to show you some examples with other cartoons on television and such. It's hard to explain.... it just seemed like there should have been slight pauses on certain parts of the audio for it to flow better. It didn't seem natural. I had the feeling like there was anxiety to get to the other scenes..it seemed like the movie was in a rush to end..
I liked the storyline, great ideas. TP bag to the face BEYOTCH!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the constructive criticism, but you did hit the nail on the head. Once you're under extreme deadlines with lines that eh, lets face it, weren't recorded by the most professional people, you run into that problem. The next movie (Which truly seems it will be ready on Friday), I've worked a lot harder on character timing to aid in the flow of the jokes. It's just damn hard your first time around. :)
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Chuck-eh, you're seeing this film as the guy upstairs. This animation displayed the downfall of modern isolation. It showed the guy denying contact with a woman, in uncertainty shrugging his shoulders, to go and indulge in self-gratification through music.
I see this animation much more dark. The "transformation" you must be talking about is when the protagonist began listening to music and it colored the surroundings. But then, when the video zoomed out and displayed him in his room, it looked like a television for the stick figures. Making me feel like the Protagonists life is not derrived from the passion of music but how we isolate ourselves from the outside world to dissolve our minds into entertainment. While we sit here on our computers, we're not attending to our true god given desires of love, company, friendship, or anything else. As the outside world is throwing a party and conquering the world...you see.
Author's Response:
I see!
Very dark indeed. I'd say that most people are used to seeing things in a box, or coming out of some strange device. I'd even agree with you about how our own isolation creates how we see things in our own world.
A very interesting comment that I will remember.
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That was an interesting powerpoint presentation. Cool use of zoom. I've never seen that in Powerpoint before.
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What?
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I think instead of shortening the time on the text to make the story end with the music you should have jsut looped a point in it to make it a little longer. That way us slow readers can read whats being said.
The graphics were awesome.
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Thank you, and I cut the music a little short. It was a difficult piece to work with, and the ending was a little choppy, so I used that to make it a bit abrupt, going from the talking scene to the bloody room scene.
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Woah, man....You used my song!! Awesome!
Really cool pre-loader and sound effects. The only thing that killed me was that roar from Yoshi...That nearly gave me a heart attack. That was loud as bejesus.
:)
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thanks...i love that song by the way...
yeah i agree i probly should've lowered the volume on that roar but...meh...
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How come this stays but Zachary doesn't?
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because Zachary is crap, this isn't
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Hey that was pretty funny. The first time I watched it I was distracted because I was hearing my song. I was cracking up when that dog got drowned. Great FBF animation. Short and sweet.
I'm glad you liked my song enough to use it. That's awesome!
-Jon
Author's Response:
I had to record the song on sound recorder cause the Audio Portal has been down for a long time.
Thx for the song ;)
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augh...A Clockwork Orange...Such a great movie..This was a nice take on it. I would have enjoyed to see that funky blanket that was in the original film.. haha. It was like, a bunch of poofy triangles.
I liked the voices. Cudos to using the same music, it wouldn't have been the same without it.
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I did make an attempt at the blanket, but it was bloody hard. =(
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